Academic English Online from Queen Mary, University of London

Here in the south-west of England there is finally a hint of spring in the air. However, you wouldn’t know it from the weather forecast: the other day as I was getting ready to drive to work the forecaster on the radio told me that it was going to be a ‘dull, dank and dark’ day. Wow! They really know how to cheer people up, don’t they? Dank! What a great word. I think that none of my students would know it. The Cambridge Online Dictionary gives the definition as wet, cold and unpleasant (especially of buildings and air).  Those days in a British winter when it never really gets light and is cold and wet: DANK.

It’s been a while since I have written a post and today there is a really good reason for writing one because there is an excellent Academic English website which has come online from Queen Mary, University of London, and it’s open to everyone! I’ve been taking a look around the site and it is definitely going to feature on my short list of great sites to use and to recommend to students. One of the pages that I’m particularly impressed by is the one which focuses on seminar speaking skills.  Participating in seminars is one area of university study that international students find particularly challenging for a number of reasons and this page highlights useful language that students can use to perform a range of important functions, such as disagreeing politely and giving an opinion.  The good thing about the Queen Mary site is that it doesn’t just list the phrases for you. Instead there are interactive exercises  in which you have to listen and identify the function of the phrases so there is a good chance that you’ll remember the phrases and you can use them in your own seminars. Visit Academic English Online from Queen Mary here.

 

Join two sentences with a semicolon!

Join two sentences with a semicolon!

I know what you are thinking: a post from English for University. Com! That’s unusual! Yes, things have been pretty hectic recently meaning that I haven’t been posting much over the past few weeks. Well, now that I have nearly finished marking a very large pile of reports from the end of last term I promise to write more.

As I was marking, I couldn’t help noticing that lots of students seem to think that they can take two basic sentences and join them together with a comma. Take a look:

 

Heathrow airport is the biggest airport in the UK     +      the owners of Heathrow want to build a third runway to expand its capactiy.

=

Heathrow airport is the biggest airport in the UK, its owners want to build a third runway to expand its capacity.

Sorry guys, no can do!

You have to do more work than that! The sentence above is incorrect! (As I said here a little while ago.)

You can write:

Heathrow airport is the biggest airport in the UK. Its owners…

Heathrow airport is the biggest airport in the UK and its owners…

The easiest way to do it  is:

Heathrow airport is the biggest airport in the UK; its owners want to build a third runway to expand its capacity.

Then you can impress your reader with the correct use of a semicolon which I bet your teachers don’t see very often! Here’s a fun page about joining sentences with a semicolon (because let’s be honest, it’s pretty dry stuff!): http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon

 

Presentation time again!

Now that we are back in the classroom it already seems as though the holiday had never happened! Over the next few weeks I will be talking to my students about presentations. One ofmy  students has already asked me: “What do I need to do to get a good mark in my presentation?”  and that’s what we’ll be focusing on in class.

In this post I’m going to just mention ONE thing about presentations, and that is the idea of AUTHENTICITY. ‘Authentic’ is an interesting word which means lots of things in different contexts. It has the general meaning of TRUE, REAL. The worst thing that a student can do in a presentation is present information to the audience that everybody already knows. What is the point? There is no point. So when I tell my students that their presentation has to be AUTHENTIC I mean that it has to be original and include their own ideas.

Once you have started to think about how you can make your presentation ORIGINAL and AUTHENTIC then you can start to think about other things such as language and structure. One of my favourite video resources on presentations which I often direct students to  is on the LLAS website  and you can watch it and learn about how to structure an academic presentation here.

Reports: tell the reader what the report is about!

A very Happy New Year to everyone! I hope you have all had a good holiday and yes – it’s time to get back to work and back to the classroom. I have already been hard at work marking my students’ coursework which they handed in at the end of last term. As I read my students’ reports I notice that the best ones are the ones which have clear introductions. In Academic English you have to tell people what they are going to read about!  Use straightforward language with sentences which are not too long. Students are often surprised when I tell them that they shouldn’t write very long sentences. A lot of students think that longer sentences shows they are being intellectual, and they will get a better mark. Well, let me show you something.

This is an extract from a real report about the impact that international students have on the economy of London. Just think about that for a moment. What do you think the effect of all those international students living and studying in London is on the city? (Yes, now you can start to imagine why businesses and universities are so angry with the government for making it harder for students to come into the UK!) Now look at this extract from the report:

1.1. The brief

London Higher commissioned Oxford Economics to undertake an analysis of the contribution international students make to London’s economy. The key areas to be included in the quantification of this
contribution are:

  •  Fees
  •  Subsistence
  •  Family visits while studying in London.

In addition, Oxford Economics were requested to calculate the economic contribution of the sub-set of students from:

  •  Mainland China, India and USA.

1.2. Report structure
The remainder of the report is structured as follows:

  •  The remainder of this chapter provides background information about international students studying in London.
  •  Chapter 2 outlines the economic contribution of London’s international students to the UK economy.
  •  Chapter 3 provides information on the number of international students who are sponsored by their employer along with estimates for the proportion of international students who remain in London after completing their studies.

Oxford Economics (2007) The economic impact of London’s international students

Available: http://www.londonhigher.ac.uk/fileadmin/documents/OxfordEconomicsReport.pdf

It’s a real document and it is a perfect example of how to introduce a report. After reading the introduction the reader knows what the report is about and the structure of the report.

Follow the link to look at the rest of the report: short easy to read sentences!