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I was working with a student the other day who had written a really really long sentence! There were so many clauses and commas, and there was so much information between the subject and the verb that I just couldn’t hold that much information in my head! Put in a few grammar mistakes because the student is not a native speaker and you can imagine my distress!
Here’s a paragraph from a journal article which I’ve used with some students recently:
It is generally agreed that overseas students are at a severe disadvantage in coping with a new education system. From various aspects, many studies reported the difficulties experienced by overseas students with their academic progress. Elkerton (1985) highlighted the extent of thesis supervision for overseas students. His research showed that, in general, overseas students require more intensive supervision than the native students. Barker et al (1991) reported the difficulties faced by a sample of Chinese students with tutorials. Felix and Lawson (1994) found that overseas students often expoerience stresses and problems not only with tutorials (including lectures, seminars, but also with laboratory work and essay writing up.
Li , R and Kaye, M (1998) Understanding Overseas Students’ Concerns and Problems, Journal of Higher Education Policy and Management, Vol 20, No 1, 1998
Read it? Fine. It’s not very difficult to understand because the sentences are quite short and easily structured. In most sentences you can see quite simply:
|Overseas students||are||at a disadvantage in coping with a new education system.|
|Many studies||reported||the difficulties experienced by overseas students.|
|Elkerton||highlighted||the extent of thesis supervision for overseas students.|
|His research||showed||that overseas students require more supervision.|
In fact it is remarkable how simple the structures are here! If you are writing a literature review look no further for how to do it! Looking at sentences like this – subject – verb – and the rest – can help you check for agreement between the subject and verb and can also help you understand complex sentences when you are reading. Keep it simple!
As usual I will leave you with a link to read around the subject a bit more. Today’s link is to Napier University in Edinburgh with some useful comments about academic writing style.